The Swan in The Silver Lake.
One day in the woods as the sun shown down on a lake. on it there lived a swan. Her name was Sue. Sue had a friend who lived nearby. Every day Sue would visit her. But on Monday her friend wasn't there so Sue cried. Soon her friend Kate came back. when she saw Sue crying she too started to cry. But soon they broke into laughter.
When Sue and Kate went back they were so surprised because the lake had turned silver they fainted. But they recovered soon and were very happy.
Let's put the possible therapy session that needs to happen here aside here and look at the ongoing issues I've had with writing since childhood; Punctuation is still not yet a friend to me and, I have always had issues writing a middle.
I'm not going to call this story premise brilliant because it's not but, where is the middle? Why is Sue crying? What is the Swan doing in this story? I mean, it's there, it's in the title and then it's gone. And why does the lake turn silver and why, after fainting, does it make Sue and Kate happy?
My name is ej. I'm a girl. I say that because with the short hair and the short initials, folks aren't always sure. More brilliant insights to who I am in About me